I try to create complex heroes, and one thing
that helps is creating strong character arcs. For deeper
understanding, I recommend reading Character
Arcs by KM Weiland. That book gave me great insights into my characters. This post uses he/she. Feel free to apply your preferred gender pronouns.
Creating a Strong Character Arc
The main character must face conflict, deal with emotions,
and experience change. All those things arise out of the following five aspects.
What does your hero want?
If your hero lives a great life, with all he or she wants
and no real needs, then there is no conflict. You must have conflict in
order to move the story forward. Your hero should want something badly enough to change in order to get it. That want will be a major driver
of your story.
What are your hero's personal preconceptions?
When your hero looks in the mirror, who is looking back?
Chances are, he/she is already a hero to someone. But how does he feel about
himself? When he looks in the mirror, does he see his failures? Or perhaps he
sees himself as a hero when others see him in an entirely different light.
What does your hero do wrong?
Sure, no one's perfect, but the personal flaws facing your
hero must provide a reason for your character to change and must be a lynchpin
in driving that change. Example: a young woman with reasons in her past that
make her distrust people in general, and men in particular meets a man who
makes her long to trust. But because of her flaws, her misconceptions and
inhibitions, she can't. She must overcome those flaws in order to find love --
to reach her goal.
What abilities does your hero possess?
The hero in any story will need to accomplish certain tasks.
It might be anything from scaling a wall to performing before a crowd, but he
needs to complete them in order to overcome the conflict and reach his goal. When
the story opens, he can't do them, but by the end, he can. Not only has he
changed the story, the story has changed him.
What scares your hero?
I have an immortal king in multiple stories. Pietas can come
back from almost any death. He's nearly 2000 years old and is as big and
brave as they come. But because he's isolated himself by virtue of his position
as well as personal choice, he's never needed friends and never wanted one. The
problem is, he's made one who's the target of assassins--and mortal. Now that
he's had a friend, how can he face eternity alone? For the first time in his
long, barren existence, Pietas fears the very isolation he has spent his life
cultivating, and he will do absolutely anything to prevent it.
The point of scaring your hero is that if your hero is afraid, it means the stakes are high enough to make him change. If you create a hero who undergoes change, you create a complex character.
The point of scaring your hero is that if your hero is afraid, it means the stakes are high enough to make him change. If you create a hero who undergoes change, you create a complex character.
Ask yourself if you have developed a hero who
has tangible wants and needs, preconceptions that don't necessarily match his
reality, faults that make him relatable, and the ability to adapt and learn new skills.
Don't forget to give him one or more fears that he must overcome or remove. A layered approach to creating your hero will hook your readers and bring them back for more.
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Bringer of Chaos: Origin of Pietas
An immortal king must doom his people to exile or place his faith in that which he most hates: a human.
Bringer of Chaos: Forged in Fire
An exiled, immortal king, a ginormous panther "kitty" and the most dysfunctional family since forever.
Bringer of Chaos: Origin of Pietas
An immortal king must doom his people to exile or place his faith in that which he most hates: a human.
Bringer of Chaos: Forged in Fire
An exiled, immortal king, a ginormous panther "kitty" and the most dysfunctional family since forever.
Kayelle Allen
writes Sci Fi with misbehaving robots, mythic heroes, role playing immortal
gamers, and warriors who purr. She's also a US Navy veteran and has been
married so long she's tenured.
https://kayelleallen.com
https://kayelleallen.com