Thriller author and
former editor Alice Orr shares tips for writing heroes.
Building a Hero with Stature – What Not to Do
If your storytelling goal is wide audience appeal, build an admirable hero. A hero the reader
will look up to, and remember that when I use the term hero, I'm referring to main
characters of all genders.
I base my admirable hero assertion on two things. First, the bestseller
lists. Most fiction titles you find there tell stories of admirable protagonists
confronting great obstacles in admirable ways. Second, my experience as editor and
literary agent, which too often illustrated what an admirable hero is not. Here
are some examples, with names changed for discretion's sake.
Caroline is the hero of a Regency romance set in early nineteenth century
England. We're told she's a woman of spotless character, which would be an appropriate
portrayal. Most readers of this genre prefer their heroines intelligent, wise and,
above all, dignified. An author seeking wide reader appeal would be wise herself
to honor these preferences.
Unfortunately, Caroline is not the highly principled woman we are told she
Instead, she shows herself to be of low moral character. Specifically, she joins a traveling
theatrical company where her performance specialty is as a procurer or, in more
forthright terms, a pimp.
To make matters worse, Caroline lacks acceptable motivation for her choices.
an unhappily married woman to be sure, but she is also from the landed gentry with
ample financial means. She doesn't need to disgrace herself and her family to escape
her husband, nor allow herself to be degraded as she does in this author's story.
A Regency era main character may find herself in dire straits. She may act to overcome
her trials in many ways, but not at the expense of dignity and self-respect. Otherwise,
she becomes too tawdry to qualify as a hero of this genre, and maybe as an admirable
hero of any genre, at least for a non-established author. Bestsellers can afford
to take chances, sometimes.
As for Sebastian, I wonder if even his author liked him very much. Sebastian is cold,
distant and uncaring. His lack of compassion must be counteracted by noble qualities
to make him an admirable hero. He could be written as remote on the surface with
endearing depths beneath, but, in this portrayal, under his craggy surface beats
a heart of unappealing stone.
Kendra has heroic qualities but is never called upon to use them. Her story is meant
to be suspenseful. She should be in danger, real danger that, to maximize appeal,
threatens her life. She is strong, resourceful and brave. We're eager to see those
qualities tested by extreme circumstance. When no truly thrilling challenges arise,
our reader expectations are dashed.
Kendra's author could have made stronger storytelling choices. A perilous situation,
which Kendra only narrowly escapes. Better still, another character, vulnerable,
like a child, faces serious threat, and Kendra risks her life to defy that threat.
These scenarios would reveal her heroism in action and intensify the suspense. Instead,
Kendra is a heroine waiting to happen, and the author squanders the dramatic potential
of her story.
Shattered reader expectations, heartless main characters, dramatic potential
squandered. Avoid these like the storytelling plagues they are, unless you're a bestselling
author with maybe some room for risk. Build instead a hero with stature we can admire.
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About Alice Orr
Alice Orr is the author of 16 novels, 3 novellas, a memoir and
No More Rejections: 50 Secrets to Writing a Manuscript that Sells. A former book
editor and literary agent, Alice now lives her dream as a full-time writer. Her
latest novel is A Time of Fear and Loving: Riverton Road Romantic Suspense - Book
5. Alice has two grown children and two perfect grandchildren and resides with her
husband Jonathan in New York City.
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